Trying to keep control

Trying to keep control is so hard to do

when your tired of fighting it

tired of being caged

tired of being walked on

and tired of being used

you feel it deep inside a flame that burns hot or cold

the sudden erge to just let loose and do whatever the hell you want to

the urge to give in to the natrual insainity we all have

the insainity called primal state

where your not held down by ropes or rules

you are who you choose to be being mature and being undercontrol is so boreing

being in a civilized state is simply boren bollicks enough not very good

all your live your held down by the rules of man and his LAWS

well I am as well but only to an extent for they can't be everywhere all the time to watch you

and it's aginst there own laws to do so

as time passes and your urge grows so does the flame that burns within you

and finnally you break free

nolonger bond by man and rules anything go's

your the star of the show the ultiment the one and only

your the one who choises what to do with this feeling use it or enjoy it while it lasts

but I pitty those who only enjoy it while it lasts cause you gotta go to work and look nice for the boss

you gotta go back to school and look good for the staff and your friends

your still ruled by others and not by yourself

hell you gotta go to church and look good for god

knowing you'll sin sooner or later anyway and you won't even be thinking of him then

well I'll tell you from experiance those who live there life ruled by men you are weak and pathetic

you fear the likes of me and those like me

because we aren't under your or someone ealses control

we are our own god we are the future leaders of great armies and great civilizations

crazy you may call us impossiable you may say

but the truth is you don't know your simply hoping we don't

cause you fear nature you fear the uncontroled

because we are unpredictable

we are unknown

we could do anything

and get away with it

we could make new things new people

we could be the thruth of 2012

 

it's so hard to remain under control

when your not ment to be controled

when your strong enough to control yourself

just not by others who are controled by fear

Reviews

[Sseoni]

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