Almost 21

.::If I could write a million (sighs) into one::.

 

What's the deal I can't find love
I know I'm no angel from above
Almost 21 and I can't find a true believer
Almost 21 and they all run in fear
I'm no cowboy in the mirror
But I gotta lot of love to give
And I gotta lot of life to live
I drink a little here and there
Oh, but what love I have to share!
Instead she walks right by me
All these girls can't see
What is deep inside of me
Why can't you love me
Instead you ignore me
And watch the hot guy on TV
Maybe I should think about my career
And not dream of her in the mirror
I'm a nice guy who loves his mustang
Oh and all the lovely songs I've sang
Still it won't bring you on your knees
Every girl I meet is scared and flees
I see all the couples holding hands
All the girls catching their daily tans
Couples making out by the water fountain
I'm just a piece of rock on a mountain
Never noticed just stepped on
And then you are forever gone
Will I ever find love on this earth
Am I just a runaway child from birth
I don't bite and I have nice personality
I know I am no rapper like fitty
But please, if you like me show it
Because I really want to know it
Instead they all runaway after a hot guy
Maybe I should say my last goodbye

Reviews

[~Qu33n B~]

This is beautiful and extremely emotional. It hurt my heart and made me feel pretty sad, but it is a wonderful poem. Thank you for posting!

~Qu33n B Cullen~

[just is]

This is a very emotional write and kind of made me sad, very well written

Couples making out by the water fountain
I'm just a piece of rock on a mountain
Never noticed just stepped on
And then you are forever gone
Will I ever find love on this earth
Am I just a runaway child from birth
I don't bite and I have nice personality
I know I am no rapped like fitty
But please, if you like me show it
Because I really want to know it
Instead they all runaway after a hot guy
Maybe I should say my last goodbye

I loved these lines here i love the whole thing.