In a Dark place

In a Dark place

A Poem by ♥Dancing giraffe♥
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"It is the dark alone that can place blackness in our hearts, but it is the compassion in our souls that can bring light in a dark place."

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The dark is resting here,

Overshadowing my calming slumber,

Nothing but stillness,

Stillness and black despair,

It glooms me to a defying sadness,

A sadness that blackens my heart,

Deep down, this grief and sorrow brings pain to my mind.

In my aguish and torture,

Chains wrap tightly around my purified body,

But there is a sparkle in this domestic suffering,

A light,

Compassion deepens within my soul,

Carrying pleasure and content,

It contains blissful joy

That can bring light,

In a dark place.

 

 

© 2009 ♥Dancing giraffe♥


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I absolutly love how it starts dark and upset, but then there is that small sliver of optimism that makes everything better, more positive and full of light. Keep up the rad work, Larry!!!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


i like this one. i didnt know that you wrote about darkness as you did in this one. nice~^^~

Posted 14 Years Ago


A striking collage of emotions articulated in this piece. Last line my fav.
"A light,
Compassion deepens within my soul,
Carrying pleasure and content,
It contains blissful joy
That can bring light,
In a dark place."
This is a beautiful expression of the truth that Light Always Overtakes all Darkness! ~ Jude :-)


Posted 14 Years Ago



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