Fossil Fuel

Fossil Fuel

A Poem by Patrick Callaghan

Sleepy fingers drew perfect circles on silver skin

Paler still by a thumbnail moon.

A single shadow, cast by two

SIlent, like a secret in the dark.

Velvet lips searched for mine

and breathed a promise in my ear

Silky words that tiptoed through the night.

 

a whisper that caught fire.

© 2009 Patrick Callaghan


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"A single shadow, cast by two"
Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful.

A delightful picture, this here piece paints.
I enjoyed the read!



Posted 13 Years Ago


So Grecian, can almost hear Orpheus at his harp quickening the dead with feeling.

Should be set to music.

A.E.

Posted 13 Years Ago


this does strike me as musical, I feel like I can almost hear it in my head.
simple and sooo nice.

Posted 14 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very musical and lovely to hear spoken aloud. The first piece of yours I've read and I'm eager to read much more.

Posted 14 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

pretty :D

Posted 14 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on October 12, 2009
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Patrick Callaghan
Patrick Callaghan

Fremantle, Australia



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