I'm No Longer The Me I Once Remembered

I'm No Longer The Me I Once Remembered

A Poem by Airila
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There are things in a relationship that I'll always miss. Like the little physical things. My bf n I have be apart for a while n its finally getting to me.

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Its not just my body that lacks the physical, its my heart and my mind

I miss his hands caressing my face, the way our glasses fog up when we kiss

The way he slides his hand into mine at random moments

I miss how he always wants to cuddle with me, the way I fall asleep so easily in his arms

The way I know exactly what buttons to push to get him

The words I say that will turn him on, I know each one

I miss just being close to him

His warm kisses and his tender caress

I miss the intimacy of it all

I need to be touched by him to make me feel....like myself again

© 2011 Airila


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Pretty good. It's a bit too literal for my tastes. There isn't much left to interpretation. It could benefit from some wordplay, some alliteration, whatever.

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Airila
Airila

Kingston, Jamaica



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A Poem by Airila