Just the Rain

Just the Rain

A Poem by SwagMaster
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Sad...

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I'm not crying,
It's just the rain.
Can't you see?
The drops are plain.
Me, sad? Uh, uh, no way.
I'm fine, okay? Now go away.
Please, just leave me be.
All you're doing is annoying me.
Really, I'll be fine, on my own.
Now, please, I just want to be alone.

© 2012 SwagMaster


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It's an emotional and a painful poem but the flow's really very cool. Nice work.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Bella, Bella like your poem I love the sound, second of June a very good day I am looking forward to it again this year,maybe it will rain again, I feel a song coming on,let it rain!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

so u have realised ur potential.......
the poem stands for it.............

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the way you wrote this poem. I can really imagine the person saying this.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the rhymes. It is a very sad write, emotional and all. I clicked with this piece. Sometimes I just want to be alone.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I have a feeling the person doesn't really want to be alone which makes it very sad.

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I feel this with some of my friends. Good write!

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

It's an interesting write with a good rhyme scheme and is effective, but I also feel that there is not as much depth in it. Good write though !

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 2, 2012
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Roosevelt, UT



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