Alpenglow Peak

Alpenglow Peak

A Poem by Eve
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I found this poem on an old site we used to post on, it's one of mine from when I first began writing in about 2004

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Alpenglow Peak

Silent Stillness of reflected brilliance,
A Lovers' wish upon wet stone,
Arched and regal against darkened skies,
Misty mountains now meet alone.
One knows not the how or why
One must live when one must die
Or why lost love lives on.
To kiss farewell to embrace hello,
Where time needs not a thing,
Dark stark mounts must meet between,
Luscious life in gold and green.
Where Alpenglow streams cling
to fading dreams after ice moon
has claimed her home.
Soft and swollen blushing resilience
Where love now walks alone.
Forever to meet where Alpenglow peaks
Cast shadows upon the stone.

 

 

and another one from 2004:

 

 

Never Rain Again

 

Rain whispers upon the windows
Blowing in winds of change
Visions of you unbidden
Reflect on window panes
Warm upon the pillows
Secret smiles exchanged,
All disguise discarded
To drown within your eyes;
Lost upon sea blue linens
Enraptured sound of sighs,
An unwrapped gift of two
Embraced desires demand;
Will never see tomorrow and
can never rain again.

 

© 2012 Eve


Author's Note

Eve
sigh, how the years do roll on, ever the depressive genre writer am I, someone please hand me a match :P

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DrD
I will hand you my hand in congratulations because this work, especially Alpenglow Peak has all the hallmarks of excellence. You have a rare gift, young lady, and I don't want you minimizing it with attempts at modesty. You are what you are and that is an extremely talented young writer.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Eve

6 Years Ago

You are going to swell my head so large my ears will be scraping the sides of the doors :) sorry I h.. read more
One word beautiful ... just beautiful... Awesome work dear poetess...

Posted 6 Years Ago


Eve

6 Years Ago

That's two words Sami, lol.., jk with you, thank you, I appreciate you, they were written when I tho.. read more
Sami Khalil

6 Years Ago

Smiling ... Welcome
No matches here. Never Rain Again caught my eye. It did a very good job of expressing that feeling that all is right in that moment. My only observation/question would be to ask what you meant for the last two lines to tell us? I feel like the poem could be just as fabulous without those lines. But maybe I am missing something. I AM old.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Eve

6 Years Ago

oh hush, you are not old at heart, lol, I wrote that 8 years ago when disillusioned about a relation.. read more
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Eve

6 Years Ago

lol, thanks my twin..OXOXOOXOX

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