The Tide Washes Me Away

The Tide Washes Me Away

A Poem by Passingdaze
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A short one. One I really like.

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SILENT ARE THE GULLS
SOARING THROUGH AN OVERCAST SKY
WAVES CRASHING WITHOUT REMORSE
AGAINST MY FEET BLACK AND BLUE

TIRED IS THE HEART
THAT YOUR LIES HAVE SURELY FED
BROKEN SPIRIT DYING
SPLIT AND TORN AWAY

TRAGIC IS THE SEA
ALONE WITH THOUGHTS OF SORROW
WASTED MORNING PASSES
AFRAID OF WHAT MAY COME

© 2009 Passingdaze


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beautiful, and without the waste of excess wording. peaceful, powerful and tragic.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

damn, heartbreaker.
it's amazing.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

As painful as this poem is, I find it absolutely beautiful.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desolate and desparaging. I like it. Such heartache. Kudos.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Added on June 26, 2009

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Passingdaze
Passingdaze

Blacksburg, VA



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I am 34 years old. I live in Southwest Virginia. I am a musician and I also love to write and read poetry. I especially enjoy strange and deeply personal writing. To my friends on this site: Please re.. more..

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