Void

Void

A Poem by Passingdaze

These petals fall without intent,
I suddenly feel so small.

This sky doesn't want my tears,
just wants me to feel.

This ending was written before it began,
I am the leftover skin .

These words are hollow,
bridges waiting to be burned.

Our wills are meant to be tested,
I DON'T WANT THIS LIFE ANYMORE

© 2009 Passingdaze


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Oooh. This is a brilliant poem. It has some anger and hurtful words in here too. I think void is a great title for it. Well done!

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Passingdaze
Passingdaze

Blacksburg, VA



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I am 34 years old. I live in Southwest Virginia. I am a musician and I also love to write and read poetry. I especially enjoy strange and deeply personal writing. To my friends on this site: Please re.. more..

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