Of Things Within

The blisters are bleeding now,

I know this can't last forever.

 

Saw my reflection and fell apart,

What the f**k have I become?

 

Please don't end this,

I fear that I am not ready.

 

If you see my ghost turn away,

I'll haunt you forever.

Reviews

[Wunderlich]

I really like that second stanza, it's direct but powerful. Very good stanza to end on as well. Excellent poem, man.