A Quiet Walk Through Your Ashes

A Quiet Walk Through Your Ashes

A Poem by Passingdaze
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Different...

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Today lasted way too long,

I thought about her way too much.

An empty gaze cast in her direction,

I wonder if she even notices?

 

Another beer and a cigarette,

Such a waste this day has been.

Her name echoes through my mind,

What am I to do?

© 2010 Passingdaze


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Interesting love lost write...Maybe another day will be the breakthrough into a wonderful joyous productive life...May your gift expand over the years to come and touch on the lives of many in a positive way...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is absolutely beautiful. and i love it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Passingdaze
Passingdaze

Blacksburg, VA



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I am 34 years old. I live in Southwest Virginia. I am a musician and I also love to write and read poetry. I especially enjoy strange and deeply personal writing. To my friends on this site: Please re.. more..

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