You Heal My Wounds

You Heal My Wounds
My poetry is lost;
For mere words are not enough,
to express your true meaning to me.
In you I see the staff of life itself,
so full of fruits
of every flavour,
dreams of ever colour,
scents to tantalise
and mesmerise my fractured heart,
until I am so struck
by the love
that flows from you
through my long hardened arteries
that I succumb in silent tears.
You surge through weeping veins
to congeal the life that spilt from me
upon cold slabs of concrete hate
and stop the leaking of my life
to hell
and the torture of my soul.

 

11/02/13

Reviews

[Deeper La'jik]

A very sharp and clear sighted look into the aspect of love, and the powerful and healing chemistry that's channeled through the spiritual hearts of two people in love. Your lines are purely universal!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Deeper.

[Traci]

Another lovely piece, John. Only true love can heal a broken heart. I'm so lucky you two have found another, much happiness!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you VITD!

[KAOlmsted]

Breaking through the ice of a cynic's heart is a very tough job...just ask My Brit ;-) You did a beautiful job here expressing that. Well done, John, as usual.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Kimmer

[KAOlmsted]

Always my pleasure, John.

[SHEEMA HUQ]

I really enjoyed this stunning appreciation of a loved one, so colourfully written :0)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Sheema

[Claire Twinn]

Lovely words John. she enriches your life and heals your pain.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thanks Claire, That she does.

[Blue Lotus]

My poetry is lost ....for mere words is not enough. Beautiful words from the pen of a Lucky man! To be lost for words in honour of love does not come easy..... cherish every moment each day.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I am very lucky as I have found someone very special. A true soul mate.

[Blue Lotus]

Like I said a very lucky man.... so enjoy your time and celebrate your love daily ...as if its s a valentine's day

[Rhianne Ney]

Great and dark write~!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Hi Rhianne not so dark when you read between the lines?

[Rhianne Ney]

Yep, it became colorful~!

["Fanatical Dreamer"]

Love it!!!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

These few words mean such a lot. Many thanks.

[Leslie Philibert]

A very dramatic write that fits exactly to the music I am hearing in the background, for music fans Franz Schubert String Quartet No. 15 - so a great moment. Good poem.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you so much Leslie

[Kajal Gulabani]

You are a deep and ardent lover.. A lucky lady is the one you have dedicated this piece to.. Usage of intellect is phenomenal. Kudos John

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Kajal. She is the most special woman I will ever known