Warning!

Trolls are devious creatures!

Warning!

Evil is abroad.

I feel it in my water

and smell its stench

permeate

from the depth of hell.

I see its preaching

in the atmosphere

but it cannot be seen

because it creeps

around in the sewers

on its putrid belly.

So beware my friends

as you sup here

in this internet cafe,

be careful that your cappuccino

is not laced

with the poisonous

froth of hate.

 

25/04/15

Reviews

[sereenaoutloud]

Oh this is spot on how evil always creeps ... Always too gutless to come out into the open face to face!
Such strong emotion in the word choice! Brilliant write!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Sereena.

[Mirab Irfan]

Wow.I loved this one.Shows clearly the strong emotions.Well portrayed John!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Passion is a beauty and a curse! Many thanks Mirab

[Lyn Anderson]

There is a mentality of some people, unfortunately, I have run across them way too often in real life, that they live on hate and controversy, they GET OFF on other's pain. These people are best frozen out, ignored, and left to stew in their own creations.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

In this case he feeds off the chaos he creates and if he can isolate someone like he did Frieda he is in his element.

[~]

I am so sorry John. It seems some parasites like to not only suck blood but to poison it too.

[Tom McRoberts]

I take it this and the troll poem are related? I don't think they're bad people (no one really is) they're just so, so insecure. Rather than confront this they take their misery online and try to bring everyone down to their level, safe under the veil of anonymity. They're the oldschool bully of the new world, though unlike schoolyard thugs it's so much easier to deny them what they want.

[andrew mitchell]

reminds me of the creature from the swamps, a nasty fellow!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Indeed, slimy! Thanks Andrew.

[Lydia Shutter]

Hate.....it permeates every site it seems....and the poetry sites run rampant with it. Sorry you are dealing with the distasteful ones. Lydi*

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you so much Lydi