True Desire

Real feeling!

True Desire

Where she longs for

my kisses to linger

I will attend.

With a vigour and

dedication that

will melt her heart.

This encounter

neither of us

will wish to end

and we will never

forget

how much longing

we have

for one another.

An honest and feral

lust that will never

be sated.

 

 

01/06/15

Reviews

[Leslie Philibert]

Fine write, especially like the last line, the use of feral and sated are impressive, and somehow shift the tone at the end, like this a lot.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you so much Leslie. Hope you enjoyed your trip.

[MsJewel]

A sensual little gem that I'm certain will melt her heart.

:) Julie

[John Alexander McFadyen]

If only lol! Thank you Julie

[AaronFreitas]

A great romantic write my friend... inspiring me to write a romance piece but I'll have to dig really deep for that haha :)

[andrew mitchell]

its the hunger from which we feed! nice stuff John

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Andrew

[sereenaoutloud]

That need and longing that overpowers everything else. You captured it perfectly in this Romantic write John...love it ! :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank yo so much Sereena.

[Kelly Scheppers]

"...a vigor and dedication that will melt her heart."

I must say, I admire your attentiveness and conviction to do and be whatever she desires.

...perhaps there should there be a d added to "satiate"?

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I would add a 'd' for you Kelly.

[SleeplessVolcano]

Never is a long time....:) But such is the nature of this desire - it consumes, and says, like a sprawling bush fire, "More, More, More". Oh he who can contain such a desire, can control the world, yet alas, we desire not world domination, if only, a desire like this could manifest, again.

Marvelous writing!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you SV

[Jamestown]

Well written and expressed!
When there is a burning desire and longing is a part of the equation
that fire only intensifies and when finally put together
grows to an inferno of passion that won't be forgotten, but
will want to relive over and over again:) Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you so much JT