False Dreams

False Dreams

A Poem by John Alexander McFadyen
"

People have to believe in something

"

False Dreams

My Gran used to hope

that her 'boat' would soon come in

but it never did!

 

06/06/15

© 2015 John Alexander McFadyen


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A phrase very much superseded by 'When I win the lotto' these days my friend.
A great throwback in time to simpler yet harder times.
Brilliant wee ditty here. I enjoyed this very much.

Posted 8 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

8 Years Ago

I guessed you would dear friend. Many thanks!
Very nice job of taking a old statement and making it new. Very creative thought and well written. I applaud you on your work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

8 Years Ago

Thank you Wilard

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John Alexander McFadyen
John Alexander McFadyen

Brixworth, England, United Kingdom



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Well, have a long and complicated story and started it as an autobiography on Bebo but got writer's block/memory fogging. People liked it though and kept asking for the next chapter! fools.. more..

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