Your Sins

There are some troubled people here.

Your Sins

Let darkness bleed

from your putrid heart,

an organ of black

satanic pitch

where the thick treacle

of malevolence sets.

There it sits heavy

as you suffer the indigestion

of hate

and spew your vomit

upon the sane world.

But we are accustomed

to such medical conditions

and we simply deal

with the aftermath

of your hateful crimes,

knowing perdition

will be yours

to consume at leisure.

 

08/06/15

Author's Note

Reviews

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Misery loves company. All I have to say about this is, excellent writing

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I agree. Many thank yous Lynn

[Willard Wells]

Yes you are correct in that you have been provided with some great material to write about. Very nice piece with great words and imagery. Good flow. Thanks for sharing.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you so much Wilard.

[cloud]

i don't know what the video has to do with the people on the site but the poem itself is very expressive and well done.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Ann. The video is a song called 'Guilty as Sin' and sin is the theme of the piece.

[cloud]

duh i should have paid more attention. thanks for clearing that up. your welcome.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

No worries.