I Fly

In the sun!

I Fly

Leave the sky to me

for that is my domain.

As I soar into the azure blue

of its heart.

The sun is my captive

so long as I hold it

to my skin.

And there it will burn

into my soul

and leave it's indelible mark;

a tattoo forever

on my flesh.

 

16/06/15

Author's Note

Reviews

[Destiny Dreamer]

OMG! Feeling so free and refresh after reading this piece. I dream of letting go of everything and flying in the broad sky ... Well your this write reminds me of my that dream. And it feels like I had to read it like this is written for me! ^_^ THANKS FOR SHARING!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Glad you enjoyed it Dreamer. Thank you.

[Destiny Dreamer]

You aRe WELCOME!

[andrew mitchell]

Like a free soul soaring free in the wind with not a care but to remember such an exhilarating moment. Nice write Again John. Obviously visiting my site is paying off !! lol:)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

LMSO!!!!! Obviously, my muse, my inspiration as always and I thank you Sir!

[andrew mitchell]

LOL what a laugh we share in our banter lol Brings big smiles John Sir Scot lol!! and your remarkable writes!

[sereenaoutloud]

So beautiful, to fly ..to be able to obtain all your dream, As I tell my kids all the time there is no such thing as can't only won't!!
There is a lot of hope woven in this write John!
Love it!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Sereena, that was the message I hoped to instil.

[Willard Wells]

Man's dream to fly never ends and you presented a very well written piece of those thoughts and wishes.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Yes indeed whether metaphorical or mechanical. Cheers Willard.

[Kelly Scheppers]

I used to dream I could fly. I'd run circles in my backyard as a little girl, [ DON'T LAUGH!! ] and thought the wind would carry me if I could gain momentum. I think it had something to do with Peter Pan.

Lovely thought, dear John!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I think all children dream of being able to fly. The innocence and charm of life reflected in a thought. I think you still run round your 'backyard' trying to take off lol. Thank you Kelly.

[Kelly Scheppers]

I should give it another shot, huh? Lol....

[fattycbreezy52]

such a close affinity with nature and its elements.It has a romantic perspective in it.Heat is necessary to warm up the blood of the poet and produce that youthful effervescence.Such an urge to fly.Amazing song as a bonus.too:)you are certainly flying on the "viewless wings of poesy"

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Fly too sweet poetess.