I'll Be Back

Faith!

I'll Be Back

Shouts;

echoes that turn to nocturnal screams,

memories in shining mirrors,

that reappear in dreams.

Tears:

sobs of pitiful remorse,

each day past is counted

in a sad, sad self discourse.

Pleas:

to God in all his mercy

to absolve me from sin,

my fall a simple heresy

so I will rise again!.

 

27/06/15

Author's Note

Reviews

[fattycbreezy52]

I miss Paul Walker:(
Such a motivational writeup.We all have been through or will go through this,at some point of time.Rising like a phoenix from the ashes.This is wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you so much FCB

[andrew mitchell]

A strong write John but it takes a very strong wind to knock the sails. the wind out of a Scot

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Andrew. Try, try, try again!

[andrew mitchell]

If I got it wrong I didn't hear the song!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

No Try, try, try again refers to King Robert the Bruce's thirteen year fight to take his kingdom and defend it from the avaricious English. It is a metaphor used to symbolic of never giving up.

[andrew mitchell]

well I nearly got it right The Scot prevailed!

[sereenaoutloud]

when we are knocked down so hard it can mean we need to check out for a while...but then we find our way again... our faith,, our way back!
Really love this write and the song... there is hope laced through it,,, a fighting spirit that no matter what life throws at us we can always find a way to return!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Indeed Sereena, indeed. Thank you so much.

[sereenaoutloud]

You are always welcome my friend! :)

[Willard Wells]

We can all rise from the ashes of our troubles with the right understanding of life and our place in it. Very nice work John. Faith in the end may be all we really have. Faith is hope and without hope there is only the end and no rising up again. Thanks for sharing.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I think you so understand the emotion I wanted to display in this one Willard. Many thanks.

[Willard Wells]

Well I think we have come to realize to some degree we are kindred spirits in our beliefs about life.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Indeed we have Willard.

[~]

A strong triangle penned ferociously. There is nothing more powerful than a promise of return.
A most apt picture and video to bring these themes all together.
well done dear friend!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you so much dear MS.