Never Clip My Wings

Never Clip My Wings

A Poem by John Alexander McFadyen
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Amy Winehouse 1983-2011 The title is a reference to one of Amy's tattoos. [Thank you to Mark Cooper, BBC Music TV for a fine review of this talented singer/ song writer.]

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Never Clip My Wings


Jazz made you;

and you made jazz your own.

From listening to the greats

had your own talent grown.


A unique singer

with a passion

to express,

who never ever

set out to impress.


Moulded as a one-off

you smouldered on the stage,

you set the world

on fire, with your

passion and your rage.


You wrote about your

weakness, your love

and all your pain,

you wrote about disasters

you wrote about your men.


You even wrote in bold tattoos

all across your skin,

where Blake had left his mark

to remind you of his sin.


You took the world by storm

but suffered for your art

and even with success

you never played the part.


And when love died for you,

you went Back to Black,

fell into a toxic world

depressed and on the wrack.


Frank and fresh but haunted,

you began to slide,

when those black dogs take you

there is no place to hide.


Gone eyes and skinny frame,

not quite present,

not the same,

distracted gestures

to the crowd

but still,

you left us feeling proud.

 

12/07/15

© 2015 John Alexander McFadyen


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A really very fine tribute, sad and beautiful John, excellent work :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Wow Amy Winehouse........What a wonderful tribute to the departed soul!:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

8 Years Ago

An emotional write for me after watching a programme about her on the internet. Thank you FCB
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A poignant poem to a unique singer. I like the way how you told bits of her story like a movie.

Posted 8 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

8 Years Ago

She was a troubled young lady who was still seeking truth when she became caught up in a whirlwind o.. read more
You've given me chills, John. I couldn't help but think she'd love this - she'd truly love this!

Posted 8 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

8 Years Ago

Yes she was a unique but troubled individual. Love her songs, her singing and her story. Thank you K.. read more
A huge talent, taken too early. Not enough people around her who cared enough to cry halt.

Beccy.

Posted 8 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

8 Years Ago

Indeed Beccy. Thank you for reading.
I never liked her music that much, but she was quite a unique character. She was the true tortured artist. This is an excellent tribute to Amy Winehouse.....she is now in Rock N Roll Heaven. Lydi**

Posted 8 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

8 Years Ago

Indeed and is already a legend. Many thanks Lydi.
Another talent down the drain as with her I miss Jim morrison, Jimi Hendrick, John Botham, John Lennon etc A nice write john

Posted 8 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

8 Years Ago

Thank you Andrew.
phenomenal tribute to a phenomenal singer....

and "all that jazz"---

she would smile at this....

Posted 8 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

8 Years Ago

The thought of her smiling at my scribbles makes me weep Jacob. Many thank yous!
a great tribute john,she would have been even greater today

Posted 8 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

8 Years Ago

I agree, such a sad loss but as I have said she is already a legend whose work will live on. Many th.. read more
 wordman

8 Years Ago

i don`t know why but they all seem to try in kill them selves
Forgive me as I see the word "Gone eyes" works, maybe "gaunt eyes and frame". Just a thought. I like this very much and it was a tragic loss. I was just starting to enjoy her work when she left. Lovely tribute. Well done as always.

Posted 8 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

8 Years Ago

Thanks Willard. I borrowed 'gone eyes' from an article written by the guy I mentioned in the notes a.. read more
Willard Wells

8 Years Ago

Alright that makes sense. Great piece.

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