The Vow

The Vow

A Poem by John Alexander McFadyen
"

A wonderful county, wonderful love.

"

The Vow

Come sweet upon this bed,

the place where I lay

for you,

for your happiness

and for your very joy.

Here I will but serve,

honour you with

every drop of sweat

until you are sated

and filled

and until you sigh

the sweetest sigh

that stirs the jealousy

of angels.

 

16/09/17

© 2017 John Alexander McFadyen


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the sweet sigh,the low moan,makes it worth all the effort

Posted 7 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

7 Years Ago

Indeed it does and many thank yous Ron.
Now this my friend - this is steamy stuff. Quite apt for a chilly Saturday night though. Love the accent!

Posted 7 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

7 Years Ago

Thank you Tony you are indeed inspiration.

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John Alexander McFadyen
John Alexander McFadyen

Brixworth, England, United Kingdom



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