Insincerity

Ah the games......................................!

Insincerity

Years of false kisses,

airbrushing away a love

that was true and deep.

 

22/09/17

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

when love turns this way---it is time to believe the real photo...and leave before the picture fades altogether.
j.

[The Seeker of Thoughts]

It is love that more often causes war. Not hate. Thank you for the beautiful words.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

It has been known to eg Helen of Troy but at a guess it is hate that wins when leader and politicians stoke the fires and put the fear of god into ordinary people. Many thanks for reading and responding SoT.

[Eleña ♥..]

Love may be the most evil thing the world created. Amazing, added to favorites.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Ah but not so true love or love for a child me thinks. Many thanks Elena.

[wordman]

well john many people think their in love,but figure out it was lust

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I guess that is one side of it Ron. Many thank yous.

[Tony Jordan]

I hate users but sometimes - like the old masters when x-rayed - there are often other copies or 'attempts' underneath.
'airbrushing away love' is a heartbreaking line John.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Indeed Tony, indeed. Many thanks.

[Lydia Shutter]

Very sad. Reminds me of the sixties song, "The games people play". So many "airbrush" away a life going through the motions fooling only themselves and hurting everyone in their paths. Good one, John. Lydi**

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Indeed so Lydi. Many thank yous.

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Yes, "the games"....moving, poignant, perfect Senryu. Love after the love is gone...all the passionate colors bleached out. Well-penned John.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Thank you Annette. Sometimes passion is a one way street.