Looking Glass World

Looking Glass World

A Poem by Pax Analog
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Lyric to WHOLE SONG of same title in playlist player on my profile pg.

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This thorny rose, this purple heart

Arrows and slings, fortunate smarts

 

It's still a Looking Glass World

what you're seeing is mostly you

In a Looking Glass World,

Wonderland is a melting through

 

Attention's gold, a will to be

beyond all worlds, where Life is free

 

It's still a Looking Glass World. . .

 

I and I in twists of fate, singing soft hallelu'

smiling eyes, eternal date,

Deeper Love shines right through ya

 

I've been around, been lost and found

through inner space, building a case

 

It's still a Looking Glass World. . .

 

I and I in twists of fate. . .

 

By passion bound, also released

the deepest Love is perfect peace

© 2008 Pax Analog


Author's Note

Pax Analog
Another vintage multitrack SONG in playlist player.

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If I didn't know your words were lyrics, I'd think they were - the tempo sort of jumps off the screen!

It's quite an unusual theme, no, it IS an unusual theme but then, you always see things differently from other people, that's what makes you a unique writer - not that I understand most of what you write - but, your words are thought-provoking and picture raising.. what more can a reader ask.

Thank you, thank you for sharing.

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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"it's a looking glass world- what you see is mostly you"

This line says it all for me. Most people do not recognize how their biases shape "reality" for them. You've captured that sentiment perfectly.

Posted 12 Years Ago


It is so true that we often see in others what is within ourselves. Even in reviewing poetry, our reviews reveal something about our self. When I look around and I see the beautiful blue sky and the trees offering shade, I see the beauty and good in mysef and I am enlightened. I think we also are a reflection of the world around us. I think more people should look around, see what good is in their environment, and if they find none, change their world, and in changing what is around them, they change themselves. Everyone deserves a bright blue sky, or whatever it is that is beautiful in their eyes.

Posted 13 Years Ago


perfect peace, it shines right through me! beautifully webbed into perfect song~

Posted 13 Years Ago


Those lyrics are indeed very beautiful, the meaning behind it is strong, the imaginery one can get from reading/ hearing this is very creative and touching.

Posted 13 Years Ago


my dude,
right now, i'm feeling like i wish i had never read this but, rather, that i had written it myself somewhere sit'n alone....but, i thank you for make'n it happen.

if i may:
"It's still a Looking Glass World
what you're seeing is mostly you
In a Looking Glass World,
Wonderland is a melting through"

this line, in particular, got me....
very sharp, succinct, and poignant....
dag

thanx.


Posted 13 Years Ago


I would love to hear this, beautiful lyrics.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I love this as lyrics, and I love what I perceive to be the truth behind the glass. When I look at me there is me, and you and we....but its still just me. I think IT laughs as me. Great though provoking lyrics....I loved it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


"I and I in twists of fate, singing soft hallelu'
smiling eyes, eternal date,
Deeper Love shines right through ya"

I very loving feel to say to love yourself. I imagine this word play can hit somebody and the feeling of the moral is east to accept.

Kind soul man!





Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

visually enthralling~ perfect rhythmic blends~ oh and I do love that last line. . . .
so true . . . .
"the deepest Love is perfect peace"

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You are a talented song writter !!!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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