Peyton Place

Peyton Place

A Poem by Paza
"

alliterative acrostic I was just having some fun with....

"

 

Passionate poet parading

Emotions. Endlessly emanating

Youthful yearnings. Yielding 

To truthful tonics. Turning to

Obsessions, once opaque,  

Never needing nurturing.

 

Perhaps playful, perhaps

Lusty. Longings languish

Around artist's addictions. 

Crafted couplets catapulting

Eternally eccentric ego.

© 2008 Paza


Author's Note

Paza
tongue-in-cheek...poking some fun at taking myself too seriously

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I like it a lot! Very well done..tying the ideas together in continuation. Unique and wonderful.
Applause!!
Steve

Posted 15 Years Ago


I like how you turned this acrostic into an alliteration collection, as well. It gives it an even more playful tone.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Though you may call this tongue-in-cheek, and though it may definitely cause some of us to laugh; I fear that many might be offended by this... but that would just leave the rest of us to laugh... just a little tongue-in-cheek. Aside from the topic though, this is an awesomely crafted little acrostic. Well done.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on September 7, 2008
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Paza
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I'm a woman, a wife, a mother, a daughter, a sister, a lover, a friend...I could be the woman next door, you never know. more..

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