Rain

A poem

It would be too bright,
If not for the cloud that sailed uphigh.
The breeze gently picking up speed, and I am entertained by the dancing reeds.

Too long had it been dry and heat seeps deep
Too long have I felt trapped in lonely fields

I felt the wind dance around me, I heard a familiar clap above.
The smell of home beside a river and an old song being sung

I walked and anticipated the sweet drop of tears. Tears that might have belong to me.

Too long have I traveled without anyone and anything. Too long have the world made me sink.

Singing the tune in the best way I can, welcoming rain in my hands.
The further I get , the faster I ran,
back to my heart, back to my land.

Author's Note

I am an amateur so please go easy on me :)

Reviews

[Avia]

I think it's a good poem. It paints a picture good enough to imagine. Some grammatical corrections: Too long had or has the world made me sink.
The further i got, the faster i ran, i assume you're using the past tense. Overall, i like it.