Baby Mama

Baby Mama

A Poem by Mr. Deft Diction
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This is a dedication...yessir!

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She wanted to complete me,

said she.

I smile and rub her belly,

for she's having my baby.

Completing me.

Like a stream flowing into a river,

suddenly everything seems bigger.

More than just a mere figure,

she stands to understand that

this thirty-six weeks will only start

to fulfill her.

I'm so indebted to her,

sometimes it's hard to look at her.

The glow in which she shines with,

intensifies the light in which her eyes already

blind myths.

Meaning that birthing (sun) is the most natural gift.

I'm so proud that I can say that

somebody will carry on,

I will create a bond....

the tree has becomed seasoned,

the apple(s) soon to exist.

What gets higher than this?

Responsiblity of raising a beautiful kid,

completing me.

As her symptoms resonate within me,

almost like I can feel his or her little heartbeat,

or the kicks from their tiny little feet.

I want to record this feeling

and blast it on repeat.

Present it in HD on a 72-inch flat-screen,

a never seen-before scene.

Completing me.

© 2008 Mr. Deft Diction


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I am so glad that you as a man see the beauty in a woman as she experiences pregnancy. It is a womans most vulnerable time, she is emotional, hormonal and motherly. Especially on the first child where you have mixed emotions, of fear and excitement at the same time. All that is necessary is that you know, you are not taking this ride alone. And I feel you in this poem, you are definately a traveling participant. Thanks

Posted 16 Years Ago


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I am so glad that you as a man see the beauty in a woman as she experiences pregnancy. It is a womans most vulnerable time, she is emotional, hormonal and motherly. Especially on the first child where you have mixed emotions, of fear and excitement at the same time. All that is necessary is that you know, you are not taking this ride alone. And I feel you in this poem, you are definately a traveling participant. Thanks

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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this is amazing, really amazing

Posted 16 Years Ago


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this is such a great, heartfelt poem!
first, congratulations, second, I hope you've let her read this, third, the subject matter is something so beautiful and your acceptance and anticipation for you child is tangible.
The way you repeat certain ideas and lines and use subtle rhymes to develop rhythm and movement shows a strong mastery of your art. this is wonderful.

Posted 16 Years Ago


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I take it you are to be a Daddy!!

Wonderful........nothing on earth prepares you for that wonderment, joy and fact you have a little person
looking up to you..............I loved these lines...........

She wanted to complete me,

said she.

I smile and rub her belly,

for she's having my baby.

A union of two souls bound under one skin.................wonderful!!
Now you better tell me all!

Posted 16 Years Ago


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I am SOUPED....little peOples... seeds of pOetic genious ! I am so excited for you.

Being a parent is the best thing in life...on its worst day!
I love the way you Love her...
truly a "MaN" who knows what a woman is...
completion ...yes...
This is really beautiful
There will be a thousand ....feelings moments and scenes you will want to freeze eternal.
My Love to Mom!

::: HUGZ zzzzz n' all that ::: ::::grin ::::

Blessssssssssssssss

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awwww..... I joined this site JUST TO READ YOU!!!!!!!!!! Bravo, NewFather....bravo!

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Out of all your pieces this is the loveliest.

I see life in this piece and as one being is being birthed, the other beings involved are being reborn.
It often fascinates me how we are more inclined to want to identify with death and what is wrong than of life and what is beautiful. This piece should be on the top writing list... but umm anyway..

Let me be the first to congratulate you on the Beauty that you are about experience as you watch the love you have shared with the Heart outside of you become flesh...

Looks like you have a new inspiration to write about...

My love, blessings, and prayers to you and yours and yours that is soon to be and already is...


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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