In Response

In Response

A Poem by Perdition
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Thought it best to present it this way

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To those who have not read, or may not agree, 
and perhaps will never agree to that stem of definition, or who
have never come to that awareness in stage opened by the
billion said fractals

Or the house built in spite of its notion 
and the concept of being filled with all too many a forgotten plan
like a grateful glance into a lost emotion

Although it may seem worthy as a dime when in need
where corruption has its game and you are free falling into images of death and life

So too are those that would disagree that poetry is found in the form, and not from knowing of hell, or life outside experiment, reinvented by the Muse's regard 

A non-experience and perhaps the end remains in its concept where the lion is contained
but this is I fear the realm dwelling into poetry and life. 

We need in the Artist
as the Artist is willing to see 
compared to this reason freed from its cage
or the music played over noise, 

Life is that painting into a canvas with the passion of a blade 

But life alone is always too deep the consideration, side by side
we live and die cold as the years we have traveled  
covered by the shrouds in our lace 

Taking the obsession from the will
as common as these clothes, we’re already on the outside trying to break in

It’s a risk to think in measures worth breaking
or to see what worthiness has in store for reality

I feel it in the blood, 
that sweet careless reinvention
a pen that pleads as it would from every abstinence accepted 
and the price lies in the continuous unwilling
or the heart bound by these pages alone

© 2023 Perdition


Author's Note

Perdition
Thought it better to present it in this manner. To see William Carlos Williams' essay on poetry...look it up ;)

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I have seen and been involved in this argument/discussion many times and in many forms. Poetry, at least to me, is a combination of experience, imagination and the art of daydreaming, which I practice perhaps far more than I ought.

I so enjoy it when a poet gives me cause to think and when they take me with them on their journey; and I for one have never been bound by form of whatever persuasion.

Enjoyed this muchly.

Beccy.

Posted 9 Months Ago


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Perdition

9 Months Ago

" The art of daydreaming"...hmmm. Maybe the pace or a mental freefall...Yeah, probably is a wealth i.. read more

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