His ode in search of light.

It's a simple poem I wrote based on how the world wants men to be masculine enough and stone-hearted. My sole intention is to change the perceptions of people who think that Men don't have feelings.

His ode in search of light.

He tries to cover up pain

He puts on a smile even in bane

Never think we all are the same

Emotions, they drive you insane

Who knew our hideaway could be our fate

Who knew this world could be filled with so much hate.

                      

I can be your mirror,                                    

Help you see a little bit clearer

They ask me why I’m here

But all that matters is never to fear

Loose the burden you bear

Because in the end no one would endear   

The end is nigh,

It may seem painless to sigh,

Hoping the minds he could defy,

He prays for everything to feel downright,

In the end he waits for the sun to shine bright.

-Alfred xoxo

 

Author's Note

Let me know what you think of this piece, IT'S A SIMPLE POEM I WROTE.

Reviews

[Rye]

I can be your mirror,
Help you see a little bit clearer

Love this part, this is so well written and so well said.

[ALFRED]

Thank you! I'm just happy to share this with you all.

[poetgurl (Plainly Meg)]

this is very well written, love the ending leaves room for hope. Amazing write

[ALFRED]

Hey there, thank you! i appreciate u for taking time and reading it.

[poetgurl (Plainly Meg)]

no problem...