Love

Love

A Poem by The_Ancient_Rock
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Love knows no creed. 
No gender. 
No age. 
No race. 
Love, is love. 
Not talking about sex here... 
Talking about love. 
Once I knew true love... 
And children's laughter would fill these dead halls...
Like many other things now...
The halls are dead and all joy is gone. 
All good things die... In due time. 

All hope is gone. 

© 2023 The_Ancient_Rock


Author's Note

The_Ancient_Rock
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A very deep write.
It reflects how love brings joy and also sorrows.
The way u explained everything made so much sense.
It ended in a sad note showcasing a theme of loss/abandonment.
"The halls are dead and all joy is gone. "
-Amy

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The_Ancient_Rock

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you.
I am so glad you enjoyed this piece.
Yes, it is about loss. You are so righ.. read more
Amy R

3 Weeks Ago

You're welcome,
Again, it was written very well...
You to. 😊
Yes, all good things do die. So do all bad things. And neutral things. It's all part of the lease.

Posted 7 Months Ago


The_Ancient_Rock

7 Months Ago

Indeed...
All bad things die in "due time" too, The ancient Rock! Once one knows true love, one will find again....It is those who never knew love will be wondering searching thru eternity. Love your poem!

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The_Ancient_Rock

7 Months Ago

Thank you Alla.
I am very pleased you enjoyed it.
Blessed be!
I do hope you a.. read more

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Added on September 30, 2023
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The_Ancient_Rock
The_Ancient_Rock

Torres Vedras, Lisbon, Portugal



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