Kay

Kay, let me say, 

if I may, 

not happy with,

you going away. 

Please stay. 

Through all the days, 

and on this day.

Make a new day of today. 

And one after the next, 

that really is the best. 

Kay, if I may say... 

Please don't go away. 

Please stay! 

For all the people that love you... 

Fight and stay! 

Today you are not going away! 

Author's Note

For Kay.

Reviews

[Ana Papaya]

Gosh. So many ways to interpret this. I read it first as a sick loved one battling illness and then I thought perhaps it's a spouse leaving behind a family. Either way it's heartfelt and with a strong clear message.

[The_Ancient_Rock]

Yes... Thank you so much for the awesome review and for taking the time to read my work.
I am glad you enjoyed this piece, and you got the right idea first. Thank you again. Take good care.

[Ana Papaya]

You're welcome 🙂

[Kim S.]

Such a sweet write. Very nicely expressed

[The_Ancient_Rock]

Thank you so much.
I am so glad you enjoyed it.
😄

[Coyote Poetry]

I can feel the need, I can feel the fear. Powerful movement of words my friend. I hope dear Kate stayed. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[The_Ancient_Rock]

Thank you friend for your kind review.
It is a difficult battle.
I am so glad you enjoyed this poem.
Take good care.
😃👍

[mou]

It is a loveable and honest request to Kay who means so much to the speaker.
'Fight and stay' - perhaps true love speaks like this...
Beautiful!
- mou

[The_Ancient_Rock]

Thank you so much.
She is a dear friend.
I am so glad you enjoyed the poem.
Take good care.
😃👍

[mou]

You're welcome :)

[Pete]

someone wants kay to stay. don't know what else to say. here's hoping to yet another kay day!

[The_Ancient_Rock]

Thank you Pete.
Take good care.

[Betty Hermelee]

You definitely wish Kay to stay....I hope you are making a convincing argument to her.... you certainly love her and are showing us how much in this lovely poem....
Warmly, B

[The_Ancient_Rock]

Thank you Betty, for your lovely review.
Take good care.
Wish you all the best.

[Betty Hermelee]

You’re very welcome!
Warmly
B.

[Chris Shaw]

Such a thoughtful piece for Kay who obviously means so much. A delightful read. Have a lovely Wednesday.

Chris

[The_Ancient_Rock]

Thank you.
Have a lovely Wednesday as well...
Yeah, she does mean a lot.
Take care, be well.

[Chris Shaw]

And you to :)

[nadia dmitri]

Some of the sweetest poems are short and simple, and that is where their beauty lies. What a kind piece for this person, amazing work :)

[The_Ancient_Rock]

Thank you...
Means a lot to me.
Thank you so much.

[Anita Frader]

At first I thought Kay to be a lover ending a relationship but then as I read on I wondered if this might be a loved one battling a serious illness or depression/suicide. Makes one think. 💛

[The_Ancient_Rock]

Yeah, you got it right.
Serious illness.
It is very difficult...
Just wanted to try and give her strength.
Thank you so much...
Means a lot.

[Anita Frader]

You're welcome 💛