Old Fashioned

She said, "You smell like bourbon."

I smiled and whispered to her,

"You smell like oranges

and taste like cherries.

Don't be bitter, sugar."

Reviews

[Lisasview]

Definitely know immediately (even with the excellent use of metaphors) what this poem is about...
Enjoyed the sweet and bitter feeling of your poem..First I have read of yours...
Lisa, now in Spain

[CLR9]

And then, they had sex.......

[Phillip W Parsons]

Ha! Provided she buys that line of B.S.

[CD Campbell]

Ha! That's good. If I was a thief I'd steal that. You brought me instantly into a scene of my own making. That's what good verse does. Have a nice day, bro! CD

[Phillip W Parsons]

Thanks! Really! That makes my day!

[Beccy]

If someone said that to me, I'd melt quicker than the ice cubes. :))

Witty and fun.

Beccy.

[Phillip W Parsons]

Thank you!

[Sami Khalil]

That is some fair descriptions. I like the usage of opposite tastes. A lovely poem.

[Phillip W Parsons]

Thanks, Sami!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome sir