Raindrop

In ‘Haiku’ format

Raindrop

Falling pendant tear

Polar inorganic mix

Transporting life’s fuel

 

@Phillozofee

Author's Note

Water is the solvent that transports many essential molecules and other particles around the body. These include nutrients and waste products from the body's metabolic processes. Particles such as some ions and molecules need to be able to move around biological organisms.

Reviews

[Gandré]

Yes the same raindrop of water the dinosaurs drank. You reminded me I should bow every morning and thank the sun and the water when I drink my first glass of water.
Extravagant Haiku - love it. Thank you for commenting on my poem. Hope, all is good. We had here some great time, years ago. A pity these people are gone. Take care of yourself. Happy creating!

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Danke lieber Freund

[Gandré]

Aber gern geschehen! Schreib was Schönes!

[Wendi A]

I really like this Haiku. Water has been on my mind here in North American where many First Nations people are fighting to protect their sources of water. I never considered it inorganic - so this really made me think.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and over 70 percent of us...is made up of "tears"--

often we live on them...we drink in the sorrows...we drink in the joys...and we shed...

lovely senryu...

j.

[yuhee]

water.. one of the most important compound matter. Can't imagine what life would be without water. Great haiku by the way.

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Well portrayed!!
Water is essential for living.
When it falls, its spherical shape gets deformed.
Water is a mix of gases and minerals.
Also, this poem has strong symbolic sense.

Thank you for sharing:)

[Valentine]

You hit the nail on the head with this gem. Valentine

Happy you are back...

[J. J. Nightingale]

The image is very interesting !!

No water..no life..

I like this !!!

Jazzy