A Delicate Heart

Haiku style format ....

A Delicate Heart

Fragile emotions

Quickly annihilated

Through love's betrayal

@ Phillozofee 2017

Author's Note

When a heart is broken .......

Reviews

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Somehow, the line in your author's note reads like the last line of your poem. At least that's what it felt to me when I read it right after the poem.

Regarding the subject, there can be no denying it. Betrayal is what causes the already fragile emotions completely break down...
Good piece. I liked the photo as well 😊

[Stacy Purvis]

Beautiful. It's perfect!
Thank you for sharing! xxx

[Kesha]

Another wonderful haiku, short & delicate but yet so deep & very true on so many levels. Nicely composed sir.

[The Archangel Gabriel]

Phil, you still around? I thought most of the old timers were gone! good to hear from you.

this was a wonderful piece. I saw the short length and thought it could be a haiku. Little did I know!

powerful words! thanks, Gabe!

[Phill Oz O'fee]

'Old Timer'? ... well maybe ... but still churning them out. Cheers for the review!

[KT-B]

hard hitting and so very true - tells a whole story in these short three lines - a sad wee write - I love it :)