Wrinkles

Wrinkles

A Poem by Phill Oz O'fee
"

Noted...

"

Wrinkles




Facial roadmap

Tracing triumphs and failures

As we grow older


Copyright @ Phillozofee 2019

© 2019 Phill Oz O'fee


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

I like this a lot, very creative.

I recently just posted 4 new poems on my page: Restless, Free-flowing, a stranger to self, and mistress.

when you get a chance, let me know what you think. Id really appreciate it.

Posted 4 Years Ago


You could never write a poem like this using a GPS! Nice.
T

Posted 4 Years Ago


Much has been written about wrinkles & this is one of the best I've read. The way you use elevated word choices & well-crafted phrasing, you SHOW that you feel awe for the aging! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 4 Years Ago


Love this is so true the face reveals our past

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

4 Years Ago

Thank you Julie - and the face also holds the window to our soul! :-)
oh my yes...i have miles on mine now...almost 70 years worth...
Mapquest has nothing on me.
such truth in this.

j.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

4 Years Ago

Cheers Jacob - they do say you get less wrinkles from smiling than you do from frowning though! Bles.. read more
very nicely said and truthful really

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

4 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind review my friend … :-)

Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

143 Views
7 Reviews
Rating
Added on September 1, 2019
Last Updated on September 1, 2019

Author

Phill Oz O'fee
Phill Oz O'fee

Winchester, Hampshire, England, United Kingdom



About
I am caught in a time spiral of confusion; that period we all experience between birth and death. Somewhere inside hides a poet, writer, lyricist and/or whatever, laying dormant and suppressed by s.. more..

Writing