Rapturous Passion

For a contest ...

Rapturous Passion

Silk draped words of tenderness

Encapsulate shared dreams,

And whimsical whispers gently brush

Against two beating hearts,

Entwined in private rituals accord

No time or space exists apart from theirs. 

 

Musky melding intoxicating scents

Abridge both lovers' souls,

In vapour resonance their love unfolds

In singularity they both reside,

For they seek not approval

From a tainted unexacting world.

 

 

Reviews

[J. Hampton]

Phil ...

This is incredibly done....
These two lines...

in a class ...by themselves

"No time or space exists apart from theirs."

"Musky melding intoxicating scents"

Only you could capture the heat and smoldering sensuality ....
generated ...when lost in the oblivion without as much as one single raunchy word...

That my poetic brother is... SKILL

Blessssssssssssssssssss

[Blade & Blood (The ..]

It's romantic and eerie at the same time!

"Entwined in private rituals accord
No time or space exists apart from theirs."

Those are my favorite lines. It just sounds so eternal. In my disturbed mind, I'm thinking sadistic lovers together forever and ever with no interruptions or people to get their way! Thanks for sharing, and I hope you win that contest!

Ironically Yours, Blade and Blood

[Kris Tate]

I like this, its full of feeling

[Seriana]

Great poem! The entire first stanza is absolutely lovely. I'm drawn to the word whimsical. Something about it, and it's use here is just stellar. Great job!

[Fran Marie]

Entwined in private rituals accord

No time or space exists apart from theirs.

A most lovely piece of writing , described in beautiful poetic expression~Surpeb pen here indeed!~
THanks for sharing your great poetry~Fran Marie

[Candle in the wind]

Each and every word breathes life into rapturous passion - you have recreated it with glowing vividness and poignancy- it is tangible yet intangible!

[James K. Blaylock]

Just beautiful, man.

jkb

[Belinda Rice]

i like this alot very good write penned wonderfuly...ty for sharing it with me i hope to see more.....



And whimsical whispers gently brush

Against two beating hearts,

Entwined in private rituals accord

No time or space exists apart from theirs.

this is my fav part.......against two beating hearts its like your say as they are one together.....good job....

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Ah, to find such a wonderful thing - away from the mundane and everything. Wonderfully expressed. Sensual and pulsating. Thank you. Best of luck in the contest.
Light,
Siddartha

[An Ordinary Woman]

Beautiful Phil. Lots of gems in this one, I like it!

Actually the whole thing is priceless. You did really great. :+)

[Sheila M]

Silk draped words of tenderness

Encapsulate shared dreams

(I'm guessing that was supposed to be the beginning...it is appearing at the bottom.)

Beautifully written! Thank you for the read request.