Beyond The Looking Glass

Beyond The Looking Glass

A Book by Pillow Of Winds
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A young man is enjoying an ordinary day when he is huanted by the visions from another mysterious world

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© 2010 Pillow Of Winds


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Well, I guess there's a backstory to this RR..
Your description was great, but be careful not to overdo it.
The biggest thing I would suggest is watching out for repeats. Not just in words but descriptions as well. Also, some of the sentences could be broken up or combined. I only saw this on occasion so it's not much of a problem.
I agree that this would be a good idea for a book.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I imagine this will continue to a book... Not bad. Just a bit more definition or description over what is happening in the bathroom. Some very good prose overall. You should send this to Domenic Luciani. He is a very good young writer of similar stories on here. In fact, I will send him a RR for this:) BTW...love Pink Floyd!

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on May 7, 2010
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Tags: Horror, Visions, Twisted reality

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Pillow Of Winds

Stirling, United Kingdom



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