A Rose of inclinations

A Rose of inclinations

A Poem by B

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The battles that are oft taken
Ridden by the shored earthly rocks

A foaming frown refusing to settle
Crashing up the seabed to deplored life

They cheer by simple touches
Of fine wine glasses of the sea

Whites releasing sea breeze freshness
Waving another goodbye to reach out in hello

They travel through oceans
Crossing continents to meet again

Through distant suns they may royally glow
Upon peaceful nights reflecting a poetic star

For birds may sip a bounty of their placid givings
Poetry written on frugal sands they let go 

As life is reincarnated through each wave
Bodies of pure blood would grow 

Yet they would pull away in ebony
Only to touch again in ivory crust

If love was to be contained a natural scene
Waves of the sea would sit on each page

Frozen in time they are roses entwined
Building a state of chained council calm

For patient lovers would learn only of sentiment
Upon the sounds of gentle waves of kisses

Hum upon hum meeting secretly in the dark 
Elusively reclined upon faint silvery lines

© 2017 B


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Deep is the ocean of loving, and your words are wild waves of light. This is richly sensual, filled with the vastness and intimacy of love's treasures, and with each reading, I see more come alive on your book's pages.

Posted 4 Years Ago


B

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your words of support
Wonderfully expressed,loved it;-]

Posted 4 Years Ago


B

4 Years Ago

Thank you WW
I have to say I am loving your support
Like the rhythmic strum of breaking waves on shore, this poem has true feelgood quality that wash away ones troubles!

Marvellous metaphor in metronomic, mood inducing cathartic repose, lovely!

Posted 4 Years Ago


B

4 Years Ago

What I review !!

Thank you Tom :)
Tom

4 Years Ago

commensurate only with your beautiful poem!
B

4 Years Ago

I am humbled
Wave motion hides a duality of impact; calm lapping against a placid shore or destructively crashing dramatically upon the rocks! A bit like the different states of love..! Great emotional and imaginative write – loved the ‘ebb and flow’ of this piece!

Posted 4 Years Ago


B

4 Years Ago

Thank you Phill
This is truly wonderful
Beautiful

Posted 4 Years Ago


B

4 Years Ago

Thank you J
To love and feel the pain of love and know that if the pain is endured the love is finally worth it all. You write with such passion and I love the images you paint with your words.

Posted 4 Years Ago


B

4 Years Ago

Thank you Dave
Your imagination and creativity have reached new heights. I like the way you take us on your journey.
Even like the way you managed to get 'Dark' in.
Well done.

Posted 4 Years Ago


B

4 Years Ago

lol
there is no levels
monsieur
there is only a good heart
writting to .. read more
Paul Bell

4 Years Ago

Well this good heart is off for a run. I'll hug a tree for you. lol
B

4 Years Ago

lol
you do that my friend
Your talent is ooozing through. You pull us in and never let go. ...:).........................

Posted 4 Years Ago


B

4 Years Ago

Thank you Sami :)
Sami Khalil

4 Years Ago

You are welcome. ...::::))))
WOW!!!! Such beautiful imagery. YOU have talent my friend.
I can feel each word with every sense.

Posted 4 Years Ago


B

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much
love and pain rolled in to one poem

Posted 4 Years Ago


B

4 Years Ago

Thank you wordman

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Added on June 25, 2017
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