Prolepsis Red

Evadings Taught in dark ray

Dipping a savage ink

 

Soft fingers touching a lustrous air

Euphoria birthed out of time

 

Scampering terror of forgotten minds

Never minding unintentioned wings

 

Discovering a sententious form of you

The supple implodes of rain

 

Smoothly turned hate

Workings of teals like thread

 

Insinuations of translated letters left to dissipate

Affinities made 

 

Arrived in hasty red

Enclosing unwavered kisses

 

Ruffles of a sea

  

The Invisible thought to be dead

Caressing the deepest red

 

Reviews

[Abraham George]

Evaded Teachings by the darkest ray
Dipping into the savage ink

Soft fingers touch the lustrous air
Euphoria Courting birthed out of time

As scampering terror fleets forgotten minds
Never minding intentioned trouble piling wings

Discovered are instances of sententious forms of you
The dizzying supple effect of imploded rains

As she smoothly turned all that you hate
An archaic work of art teals of thread

The thin insinuations of translations left to dissipate
Affinities made to pull at your bedside

Arriving in hasty satin of the deepest red
Enclosed by a gentle unwavering kiss it rests

Yielding ruffles of consecrated seas
As everything invisible thought to be dead
Came to life aroused in the deepest red

i loved it but i find it hard to read.
Keep writing. only suggestion is to increase your font size.

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I don't know
I actually love it
But Thanks for your comment :)