Good-bye

Sleep deprived and weary-eyed

Thoughts of death and suicide

Hiding the pain and imperfections

Trying to exceed all expectations

Cutting and burning away insecurities

Saying, "I'm fine," and ignoring my feelings

Every day the same as before

Living and breathing becoming a chore

Waiting for something I know will never come

No reason not to pull the trigger of the gun

Waiting and waiting for something more 

Running further and further, knocking at death's door

How much longer will I be here they ask me

I say, "I don't know." But I do, I'm just waiting

Five, four, three, two, one come and find me

Or don't because if you do I won't be breathing

Good bye world

You're all better off without me

Reviews

[Mauricio Montoya]

Very, very sad good bye,a cry for help, great job with the flow and the words you choose as tragic as it may be, excellent write