Don't Give In

Don't Give In

A Poem by RIch Hilliard

A some what profound religious poem


Never falter, never waiver

The qualities of our God born Savior.


Spirits of the body, believe with no doubt

Only then, the powers, the qualities, will be let out.


Victorious celebrations must be kept in short key 

For the desire to live will be set free.


The desire of want, what we want most

Makes us weak, supplying our desires, makes us their host.


Scriptures of life, living the text

Guidelines, but showing, not what comes next!


Puzzled within, the mystery of life

Beg to begin, limits unkwown, will then be sufficed.  


© 2010 RIch Hilliard

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Wise words. Life can be hard. Good people must go forward. A outstanding poem. Thank you.

Posted 13 Years Ago

Ever so amazing and i must say "AMEN!!!!"

Posted 13 Years Ago


Posted 13 Years Ago

Though I dont nessecarily agree with the context, it, as always, was well written. nice job(:

Posted 13 Years Ago

This is religious, but in a loving, compassionate way, a better way to get others to notice than trying to force it on others with threats and violence. Nice job.

Posted 13 Years Ago

I always love when writers share of their spirituality. Although I am of a different faith, it is lovely to see souls speaking of their love and devotion to their Higher Power as they know and love their God.

Your poem speaks of a profound love.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Posted 13 Years Ago

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What a beautiful poem! Great piece, thanks for sharing.

Posted 13 Years Ago

This is a beautiful poem in the way that it flows. Your thoughts speak about many things that people think. Spirituality is a hard topic to write on. I have so many different thoughts, questions and so on that it is hard to get them all on paper. I love God and believe in Jesus. I believe God will show me what life was all about for me when the end comes.

Posted 13 Years Ago

You're right very religious, not in a shove-it-down-your-throat way more in a listen-to-my-preach-for-god-is-great way :]

Posted 13 Years Ago

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Added on November 21, 2010
Last Updated on November 21, 2010
Tags: Never Falter, Never Waiver


RIch Hilliard
RIch Hilliard

Pittsburgh, PA

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