Don't Give In

A some what profound religious poem

Never falter, never waiver

The qualities of our God born Savior.

 

Spirits of the body, believe with no doubt

Only then, the powers, the qualities, will be let out.

 

Victorious celebrations must be kept in short key 

For the desire to live will be set free.

 

The desire of want, what we want most

Makes us weak, supplying our desires, makes us their host.

 

Scriptures of life, living the text

Guidelines, but showing, not what comes next!

 

Puzzled within, the mystery of life

Beg to begin, limits unkwown, will then be sufficed.  

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Wise words. Life can be hard. Good people must go forward. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[better off]

Ever so amazing and i must say "AMEN!!!!"

[McGee]

nice

[kij143]

Though I dont nessecarily agree with the context, it, as always, was well written. nice job(:

[Tina Kline]

This is religious, but in a loving, compassionate way, a better way to get others to notice than trying to force it on others with threats and violence. Nice job.

[Goodbye]

I always love when writers share of their spirituality. Although I am of a different faith, it is lovely to see souls speaking of their love and devotion to their Higher Power as they know and love their God.

Your poem speaks of a profound love.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

I LOVED THIS ONE! WROTE WITH SUCH MEANING!

[Lia]

What a beautiful poem! Great piece, thanks for sharing.

[Poetic Beauty]

This is a beautiful poem in the way that it flows. Your thoughts speak about many things that people think. Spirituality is a hard topic to write on. I have so many different thoughts, questions and so on that it is hard to get them all on paper. I love God and believe in Jesus. I believe God will show me what life was all about for me when the end comes.

[Laureeann]

You're right very religious, not in a shove-it-down-your-throat way more in a listen-to-my-preach-for-god-is-great way :]