Insatiable.......

Senryū

 

 

Caught up in your world

Captivated is my heart

Captured by your lust

 

 

 

 

                              

 

 

 

            

Author's Note

Outside looking In.............

Reviews

[Revery]

No comment. ;)

[D.C.Randon]

Love it.

D.C.

[VelvetRosetta]

Very nice thought...I like this!

[♥ Kinnixk]

Very nicely written. Keep it up! :D

[Rhea752]

beautifully written. great job!!! keep it up!!!!!!!! :P

[EMF]

There's only one scarve there. Just one. That means your four down to begin with. But the Senryu? Superb. A truly sensuous work. But only one srarve?

[Wondering Mind]

A sensual senryu...I love them, senryus I mean..nothing to do with the toe ring and the purple bond..
Very nicely done!

Cleverly blindfolded...
Always walk on your instincts,
They lead you even busted...
Nice one!

E.L.

[Autumn]

Full of meaning, as it's very short, it leaves the reader to imagine different situations, differents emotions. Stunning choice of words.

[MIB]

Really awesome... I'm not sure if it's one person in love and one in lust or both in love but one is more passionate at that moment? either way it's awesome... ;) keep up the great work.