SeDuCeD.....

Acrostic

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~Sensual touches from his hands caressing her body~

~Exciting her senses she becomes powerless~

~Delirious convulsions overtake her whole being~

~Undulation in her spine about to let go~

~Crescendo as they light up the dark skies~

~Euphoric feeling showering his seed of satisfaction~

~Deliciousness so tasty neither of them can deny ~

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

This is one of the hardest poes to write but you did an impresive job

[Hotwater]

That pen of yours is on the verge of melting!... hot stuff!
*bird*

[BL]

The way you write it, i can feel the impending release in her as she becomes overwhelmed by him. The C is my favourite line, although it is all very sensual and well done and fits together so nicely.

[Jibey]

Lovely image and words to match...Clever use of 'seduced' - and a great sense of building climax... 'seed of satisfaction' simply describes the cumming and the association of shower and of tasty adds to the feeling that this was a good one...

Let's do it! :-)

[quinfinn]

okay, this is superbly sensual and slurpalicious....i am gonna have a huge water bill this month if you keep writing poems like this one. i wonder how many cold showers i can stand. very, very nice!

[Yellow Butterfly]

Oh my darling Quin..... you really do make me laugh.... but I'm not laughing at you my new friend.... I'm laughing with you.... thank you for your funfilled witty reviews... :O)

[quinfinn]

always a pleasure.....

[Buddhistboy73]

Yeah YB, you're on fire here...! V inspiring and erotic write..:) Like the wordplay too..:)
Each line is great, but my favourite was:

"Euphoric feeling showering his seed of satisfaction".....
fantastic imagery here...:)
BB

[Yellow Butterfly]

Thanks BB...... I think I've been seizing the moment today... and just letting my pen's imagination run wild and free.... :O)

[Frieda P]

OMG girl, did you take a viagra today or what?! This one's really delicious with a capital D...love it! Calm down, you're gonna give yourself a coronary today. ;-)

[Yellow Butterfly]

I'm just having one of 'those' days today....:O)

[Frieda P]

Well I sure hope there's some hot topless guy around! :-)

[Yellow Butterfly]

Actually........ hahahahahah :o)

[Frieda P]

He better watch out his butt doesn't show up on the WC! hahaha ;-)

[Yellow Butterfly]

Hahahahaha... yeah Now that would be a sight for sore eyes.... hahahaha