Behind the Veil....

Touched by his soul he lets me caress away his curiosity

Tasted by his passions he lets me indulge every inch of him

Heard by his heart beating he allows me to seduce his soul

Smell from his desires he lets me engulf myself in his essence

Seen through his eyes he looks deeply into my presence

 

Feeling his aura he drenches me in his heart’s desire

Relished in his passions he lets me set his world on fire

Listened to his pain I heard the ache consuming his body

Fragranced his mind as he entwines me in all of his masculinity

Behold his vulnerabilities he lays bare for me and all to see

 

Handled my heart with care he protects me from harm’s way

Savoured my soul he lets his wildest passions ravish me whole

Understanding my needs he succumbs to giving me his all

Scented my body with fragrant roses dazzled by his charm

Looking through my veil I see a man whose heart I have disarmed

Reviews

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

Women, indeed do have the enchanting ability to make us men drop the walls of a guarded heart. I enjoyed the flow of your words here.

[Tom]

All consuming desire with no barriers attached, this passionate love is indeed ecstasy to every one of the senses!

Sumptuously sensuous and satisfying ! ( in a metaphorical way ofcourse ) !!

[David Wesley]

I want to say... open to imagery. Your words are "blurry", as if to say non-specific, so it leaves it up to the reader to interpret what is happening.

"tasted by his passions"
"deeply into my presence"
"savoured my soul"

I think some would be turned off by this approach but it does take skill to hover over the specifics and still keep the theme flowing. It stirs up the reader's mind because the poem doesn't tell you blatantly what is happening, i.e. "i felt his skin, i kissed her lips.." It works well.

For me it is very hard to write in this style, but you have a knack =)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Now this is Amore!... You have etched the beauty of this man...of his heart and soul!
I felt every sensation you have conveyed, this takes talent, my sultry friend!

I especially loved the end...the last two lines melted my heart . Lovely write, Lady Butterfly!~xo~:)

P.S. The artistic painting goes beautifully with your words. (I love that pic) :D

[kelvin]

Hot like fire here this was like watching a short film from the touch to the scent of roses one giving and showing vulnerability giving his compassion to please himself but not only himself but his partner as well handling your her never to break it but put it in a protective case shielding it from harm. Nice read here showing the compassion between two people mentally inside and physically and as always keep writing fellow writer.

[Not Your Typical New Yo..]

Whooo, what a sweet but erotic poem u haver here. Sounds like he's one lucky man

[Frieda P]

Tables turned in this delightful delicacy.. you've got seduction down to a science here, tastefully so.

'Savoured my soul he lets his wildest passions ravish me whole'

All you had to do was write that one line and I was there! Seductive bewitching here...Brava YB!

[Poetic Justice]

wow ..my darling YB..you are the epitome of one who writes, grows and one who grows, sparkles..you have grown in such a small time into an inspiration..bravo..simply stunning. BTW loving the title LOL

[David Scott]

I love reading poetry of passion. Ever poet feels so unique to read. Every poem shows a truth of love and the calling of base desires mixed with our highest spiritual knowing. Your poem reveals much of the submission to love and the vulnerability offered when we take anouther into our own soul.
Thank you for this lovely poem.

[Ezel_Amaru]

Passionate writing indeed. Its a transition of you starting as the seductive aggressor then becoming the submissive lover he craved for in the situation. I enjoy visuals in other writers work so I was pleased with this piece. Great Job.