Just One Word....

If you had to describe

me in just one word

Do you know what that

one word would be?

If you think you know me

go on choose a word and see

So many words to play with

where would one make a start?

Words describing all the things

that make up my delicate heart

But do you really know me

can you really read my mind?

So many words to play with

 words not so easy to find

Many  words going on

all around in my head

Intrigued to find out

what words were said..

Author's Note

Reviews

[Andrew James Talbot]

Nice work - good rhythm and structure, but disappointed as no answer was given!

[Yellow Butterfly]

Thank you for stopping by.....

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

You seem to have a talent for finding pics to match your pieces perfectly. They complimented the other perfectly here. Nicely written.

[Yellow Butterfly]

lol thank you.... this one is a better resemblence and reflection of the real me....

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

I understand... It's a powerful pic to a powerful, thought evoking piece.

[Yellow Butterfly]

Yeah your so right.... I often wonder..... how people perceive one another and if they were to sum each other up with just one word... what would that word be....

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

We are to selfish and lack to much information on anyone around us for the answer to be truly sincere. I hope there comes a day in the history of man, where we sincerely view each other as a singular, united race. Then again, I am a dreamer.

[Yellow Butterfly]

I here you..... I share your same views.... and yes I'm a dreamer too...

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

At least we aren't alone. ;)

[Yellow Butterfly]

........................... :O)

[Anne Bathory]

Other than a few changes in punctuation to make the meter more even, I would say you have the beginnings of something quite lovely here!

[Sami Khalil]

A butterfly...:)

[Frieda P]

This is an intriguing write YB, we see ourselves in one way, and others see something or someone completely different it seems. No one can walk in our shoes or been where we've been, so we all come away with a different take and view on our own reality and that of others. I like this one, much food for thought here. Nicely pen'd!