Deeper Love...

Two versions...

Deep is his love as he surrenders something so pure

Even he cannot hide his emotions of which there is no cure

Engulfed by feelings of burning desires raging inside his soul

Passionate are these two lovers entwine as they become whole

Exploring one another as their passions run wild and free

Ready to protect his love for he is her armour clearly for all to see

 

Locked in their deep love of which neither of them can deny

Overwhelming feelings of powerlessness both unable to defy

Vigorous and forceful she succumbs to his presence and touch

Entrusting her life in his letting him know she loves him so much

 

   

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Sweet is my surrender of a love so pure

No one can deny my emotions there is no cure

Feelings of burning desires deep inside my soul

When two lovers entwine they become whole

I can feel our passions running wild and free

Your love for me is my armour clearly for all to see

Protecting me keeping me from any harm’s way

Letting me know that your love is for keeps for always

Reviews

[Tom]

Blissfully delightful and cleverly crafted, a real treat to read !

[Friday]

Very good. More lines for me to chew on :). Only one thing and that's a typo: shouldn't it be "entwineD" in the 4:th line? Very good write in expression. Thank you!

[Yellow Butterfly]

Your welcome and yes.. :O)

[quinfinn]

wonderful acrostic, beautifully and skillfully penned...and the second version is pure bliss...outstanding writing!

[BL]

I like the way you express the feelings of live from both sides it gives this poem so much more depth, a beautiful piece of writing

[Sami Khalil]

Both are nice and flowing greatly...:)

[Sami Khalil]

The title , the poem , the emotions are all great and along with the pics you choose...Bravo...:)

[Yellow Butterfly]

Thank you dear friend.... I've since added another version to this write... take another peak :)

[Sami Khalil]

OK. I will...You are welcome...:)