All the leaves are brown...

All the leaves are brown...

A Poem by Yellow Butterfly
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~Haiku~

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Natures changing force

Summer but a distant dream

All the leaves are brown

© 2013 Yellow Butterfly


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Yellow Butterfly


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Great haiku to hail the autumn season!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Yellow Butterfly

10 Years Ago

Thank you Rita.... :O)
Great Haiku, great music too...knock out the 'is' and it's perfect YB!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Yellow Butterfly

10 Years Ago

Thanks Fp... :O)
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Always my pleasure, and perfect now! :-)
5 8 5... I liked the haiku...and the music accompaniment...but we have an extra syllable there:

Natures changing force
Summer but a distant dream
All the leaves are brown

thanks for the invite...

Posted 10 Years Ago


Yellow Butterfly

10 Years Ago

Thank you Glen.. Much appreciated.. :O)
Glen Yumang Manese

10 Years Ago

u r welcome...any time...
It continues to captivate the imagination of mankind for millenniums past to the present time, the changing colours of the seasons and none and beautiful is the fading summer as it melts away to autumn !

A terrific Haiku !

Posted 10 Years Ago



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