Your Name.....

 

 

 

I heard your name

 called out today...

I looked up

you weren’t there....

Maybe I was hoping

to see you again...

It’s been a while

it didn’t sound the same...

Last time I called it out

I knew it was too late...

It was at that moment

 your love ebbed away...

Even though you’re gone

I know you’re near

I see you everyday

through my 

dew drop tears

Although I don’t

call out your

name anymore

Your laughter

Your smile

Your face

Your eyes

Most of all

Your name

will always

remain

the same

right here

in my

dew drop heart

Always

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Otsana]

This is so full of emotion, you've really managed to make that connection with the reader, well with me anyway. Thank you for sharing!

[Friday]

Hmm. Moving piece. Cyril...

[David Wesley]

Wow.. "I see you everyday

through my

dew drop tears"

That was an impressive stanza for me YB... very original.

=)

[ANTO]

So very moving and heartfelt YB - Cyril - poignant tribute indeed.
Thanks for sharing
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[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

Such a lovely and endearing write.

[00000000000000000000000..]

Aww that was a sweet write I loved it :) Sometimes we just don't want to forget what 1 has placed inside :)

[s y e]

I adore this song, it makes me cry for some reason, it holds some much emotion. An amazing write, and a beautiful tribute.

[Glen Yumang Manese]

The endearing lines of this verse...the sorrow within each line just gives to the reader as you read this one...YB...the song adds to the effect...

[Tom]

I can just about make out the image of a little bunny rabbit's face through the dew drop tear, what a beautiful graphic to accompany such a deep reflective love, revealed so passionately through the words of this sweet poem!

Splendid Butterfly, I love reading poems with lots of feeling within and your cup always runneth over with emotion !!

[Yellow Butterfly]

This is a tribute to my late 'DAD' and this was one of those... "It hits you when you least expect it" moments Tom.... I hear the word ''dad' but I hadn't heared my 'dad's name since he passed.... until yesterday whilst watching tv!

[Tom]

A fitting tribute from deep within !

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Wow! I like this unique acrostic of your love one's name. It's true that even a long period of time passed by, you will still remember someone dear to you...even if he's not there with you anymore.

I love the choice of words and the format. Very captivating, YB. Keep it up!