Strip Me Bare......

Senryū

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I am of colour

 

 Strip me bare reveal my soul

 

 I bruise easily

 

 

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Author's Note

Reviews

[alanwgraham]

Fantastic and not what I expected. Your invitation to strip you bare leaves me looking for more.
Cheers, Alan

[Pete]

delicately telling and truth revealing. skillfully written with an innocent honesty. great accompanying song. sounds like my kind of woman. what's not to like ... :

[Chris Shaw]

There are many colours in my palette of life. All are beautiful. So is your senryu, as well as having impact. Posted image is appealing. Thank you YB.

Chris

[Will Neill]

YB. Short but very colorfull. Nice.
Will

[Otsana]

Very beautiful, it reminds me of someone exposing themselves, leaving themselves vulnerable. Nice work!

[Glen Yumang Manese]

YB - You capture the moment here...Good to read your work…Thanks for the invite to read your thoughts to paper at Writers Café...I'm back to work with copy writer and doing my best to write 1000 words a day...and a subject you do not get to choose...will be busy the next few months...so I will read all RR"s might just take a bit longer to get a review...hope you understand...plus promote my book: The Onyx - Vena Amoris...for late next month release…I have very little time on my hands…making the most of everyday and taking today to read as many as I can…keep writing and sharing your creative talent here and elsewhere…

[David Wesley]

Bitter sweet.

Something I don't find in your writing too often.

Adds character.

And is definitely human.

[BL]

I expect you are a lovely bright lemon yellow Yellow, nice Senryu

[s y e]

Beautiful imagery and very bitter sweet.

[Dr. Wood ?]

very emotional Yellow.....................Clever