True love, so beautifully described, ALL can relate for they either have it, or so desire it, even if they won't admit it. Beautiful piece, made me fall in love with their love. Thank You, keep writing.
Your romantic poetry is as bold and exciting as new found love itself, I very much like the train of thoughts I was taken along with this, keep writing you are inspiring me
This is a very sweet love story, and I enjoy how it's simply told in only a few words. I liked the small "butterfly" reference with "flutters deep inside," (even if that was unintentional).
I noticed one small typo in the second stanza - where it says "As the[y] get to know each other more," but other than that, I love it! Beautiful little story.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thanks for stopping by Eric and reviewing... much appreciated..
your choice of words and style seem very familiar, do you go under a different name? this is a wonderful poem. love it from context to form. excellent write!!!
Hi Mark.. thank you for stopping by and enjoying this piece...
All my own work and only.. read more
Hi Mark.. thank you for stopping by and enjoying this piece...
All my own work and only one account for me... Yellow Butterfly... feel free to check more of my work out. :)
11 Years Ago
so will, truly enjoyed this....and very happy to have stumbled upon you.
11 Years Ago
That's cool... and thank you... I look forward to reading and reviewing your work too ...