Thundering Rain

Nocturnal insatiable desires

Awakening their senses

Intensifying raging pulses

Sensitive to his touches 

Drenched to her panties

He pulls her closer to him

Bodies writhing skin to skin

Wet lips wet kisses moist

Pulsating waves cascading

Like a rapid waterfall of lust

To and fro about to combust

Deeper and deeper they go

Lost in the heat of the moment

Lightening bolt out of the blue

Crescendos of Paradise hues

A collision an electric charge

The night skies come alive

Timing is all that matters

     

Author's Note

Reviews

[Pete]

wow - i'm spent. that's certainly how it can feel. it's a warm day and it just got a lot warmer.

Crescendos of Paradise hues

love the title, wording, imagery and flow. very emotive for sure. just wow ... :)

[Yellow Butterfly]

Thanks Pete…always enjoy reading your thoughts on my work…. :)

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

ah the passion of love, desire, ache, and yearning. The words flow like water in your poetic narrative. Thank you for sharing.

[Yellow Butterfly]

Thank you Carlos for stopping by and reading my work and leaving a lovely review …much appreciated.

YB

[Chris Shaw]

Dear Yellow Butterfly how exhilarating your lines are. Beautifully conveyed and much enjoyed. Such a sensual piece.

Chris

[Yellow Butterfly]

Thank you Chris....really appreciate your thoughts

Hope you are well and keeping safe

YB

[Chris Shaw]

All good. Thanks for asking. Hope all is good for you too.

[Yellow Butterfly]

You're welcome....
All is well for me too... :)