DREAMING

Yellow Butterly

• • Dreaming with my eyes open
    
    Seeing my efforts come alive...
    
    This is it, this is my reality...
    
    This....really is do or die.....
    
    Dreaming with my eyes open
    
    Is this really happening to me....
    
    Yes it is, YES IT IS, this is how my life's meant to be!

Reviews

[Inspiring Writer]

It's a well penned write once again you dropped here and flattered me again by your words. I enjoye dthis piece and even it's a noon time so, it's a gloomy time.. lol with a sun shine but your writes;re making me freah and i;m gonna get refresh ;) keep writing, i''m really enjoying your writes. I think "Yellow butterfly" is much intelligent in writings than white, pink, black and so many other butterflies... lol.

[Erica Daubert]

This is great. Sometimes we mask our reality when we just can't deal. We all do it, we can try not to... but that is the human condition. I dig this a lot.

[Bridget Murphy]

Interesting, in only a few lines you realized life and reality, a very good piece!Well done!